This march we came to school thinking that we were finial done doing are portfolio pieces that toke so long working on, but soon on we all discovered that the Governor of Kentucky passed a law that are portfolio pieces don't go to state scoring they just go toward our class grade. All of my class mates sort of looked like it was the best thing ever to happin but to me i thoght that it was teribal thing and that i worked so hard on it and it doesn't go to state scoring it wasn't fair. The portfolio helped us learn so much about writing such as writing novels, poems, and literary anaylas.
The day we came to school when we found out we were going to turn our portfolio's in is when we were shocked by the law. " Why could it not have waited till next year since we all ready did ares this year." one of my classmates said. "It couldn't have came at the worst time espsily since we were turning them in on that day." I thoght to my self on that horade day. Then all i could bear was that at least we stillgot a grade thogh.
The day we came to school when we found out we were going to turn our portfolio's in is when we were shocked by the law. " Why could it not have waited till next year since we all ready did ares this year." one of my classmates said. "It couldn't have came at the worst time espsily since we were turning them in on that day." I thoght to my self on that horade day. Then all i could bear was that at least we stillgot a grade thogh.
First of all, WHAT does the picture have to do with this posting? Is it because the kid is shocked as you were when you learned about the new law? Second of all, I agree with you that the timing of the portfolio changes was crazy. More importantly, though, I know how much learning to write, really write, does for kids every year. I'm really proud and happy to hear you say so!
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